Hens Lay Eggs
food for thought
Yes, there will be a new book soon!
Buckle your seatbelts! The sixth and final book in the Twin Moons Saga is coming out this summer.
Titled Light of the Twin Moons, this story connects Iselde (a secondary character from Book #5: Champion of the Twin Moons) and Marog (the villain from Book #1: Daughter of the Twin Moons). Marog in this story no longer uses his original name but calls himself Koriolis.
Light of the Twin Moons breaks from some of the patterns set in the previous books in the series:
- The main male character’s name—not the female main character—begins with a “k” sound, and the name actually begins with a K. Earlier book protagonists were:
- Thelan and Catriona
- Falco and Calista
- Uberon and Corinne
- Ishjarta and Cassandra
- Chastian and Coral
- Koriolis and Iselde.
- Both protagonists are (or were) fae.
- The FMC is older and more powerful than the MMC. But let’s face it: when you’re dealing with immortals who are thousands or tens of thousands of years old, the age gap doesn’t really make any difference. They’re both ancient.
Some themes hold true, such as:
- There’s a strong arc of redemption in this story. Marog (aka Koriolis) was the reprehensible villain from the first book. He’s got a long way to go to redeem himself.
- The oracle gets involved, although this time she’s actively manipulating events to suit her purposes. (Let me tell you, Iselde doesn’t appreciate her other’s machinations.)
So, what happens in Light of the Twin Moons? I’m still working on the back cover copy, here’s the gist:
Fed up with her daughter’s defiance, the fae oracle sends Iselde to the mortal realm where she encounters the king of the New Orleans vampires, a fae-turned-demon named Koriolis. Unfortunately for her, she is his one true mate.
The iron of the moral realm infects Iselde. To resist the corruption, she accepts the mate bond, just as the oracle intended. However, mating is only a stop-gap measure; Iselde must return to the fae realm if she’s to survive without turning into a demon, too. The oracle offers them that opportunity, but first they must retrieve a legendary sword: Asi.
Finding Asi requires traveling to the Indian subcontinent. Their search takes them to a derelect temple in India where they meet the Indian god Indra who rather resents having been downgraded from the “maker and destroyer of worlds” to a mere rain god.
With Asi finally in their possession, the oracle returns Iselde and Koriolis to the fae realm and tosses them to the not-to-tender mercies of the midnight and dawn unicorns in the Deepwood. The unicorns lay a compulsion upon Koriolis, needing a demon to exterminate other demons. (Fight fire with fire!) The unicorns release them and they make their way to Djaria, the desert nation of djinns, the hereditary enemy of the fae.
Indra follows them to the fae realm; he wants to reestablish himself as both a mighty god and king. Koriolis and Iselde just want to be left alone, but he cannot resist the compulsion laid upon him. It gets bloody fast. And frequently. The relationship between Koriolis and Iselde deepens, and their trust in each other grows. Iselde asserts her free will and, with the help of the Unseelie King Uberon, manages to break the compulsion enslaving her mate. Koriolis does redeem himself through action, not through words. Iselde is no longer alone or lonely.
Yes, there’s an HEA.
Yes, I have a lot of work to do to turn that into an effective hook.
So, here’s the plan:
- Finish editing and revision by June 30.
- Revise and finish proofreading by July 15.
- Publish by July 31.
In the meantime, I’ve begun writing the fourth and final book of the Triune Alliance Brides series. This book will be the sequel to Triple Burn and conclude Ursula’s story with a bona fide HEA, not a bittersweet ending. Look for this book to come out by December 31.
Are we oversensitive?
“Gatekeeping” is typically a claim made by authors who resent being urged to hire professional editors, designers, and graphic artists to produce quality books. They view the reading public’s expectation of and demand for quality as prohibitive and unreasonable because they publish their books for themselves and want to acquire fame and fortune from those books.
I understand it. I used to be one of them.
However, there’s another kind of gatekeeping, and an entire branch of service has formed around it: sensivity reading.
Sensitivity reading stems from the conviction that authors are not able to and should not write characters if they don’t have the lived experience of those communities from which those characters are derived. To do so assumes adherence to pejorative stereotypes and incites outcries of cultural appropriation. The offended typically apply this to white authors writing Black characters.
I disagree.
In an age of political correctness, gender ideology, and heightened sensitivity to slights perceived and real, it’s easy to take offense and ascribe insult where none is intended. JP Sears illustrates this delightfully in his YouTube post here: “How to Get Offended.” (I also think no one has the right to not be offended. To live without being offended is not a reasonable expectation. One cannot go through life without giving offense or taking offense at something every so often.)
However, I offer examples as to why the false dictum that one must have lived experience in order to write a well-rounded, compelling character is, quite simply, wrong. For instance, no one alive has lived experience from the Revolutionary War or the Civil War. By the sensitivity reader’s claim, that means no one is able to write an authentic character from such a time period because that author hasn’t lived it. Historical fiction is a popular genre, so this alone debunks that concept.
I believe an author can and should write what he or she imagines and should also conduct the research necessary for versimilitude.
Tony Hillerman did that with his Navajo series. The protagonist is Joe Leaphorn, a tribal police chief. He lived in the time the stories take place (the 1970s), and he did the research necessary to deliver verisimilitude to readers. The series is popular, and I’ve not seen folks protesting against him or his books for cultural appropriation.
Of course, sometimes research isn’t feasible. A science fiction author who writes about blue-skinned, four-armed, reptilian aliens from some faraway planet in the universe cannot have that lived experience. Nor can an author who writes classic fantasy starring elves, dwarves, orcs, and other mythological creatures.
I posted on this topic in LinkedIn. The responses were gratifying:

Zafar Ahmed Ansari commented: “I agree. As per sensitivity reading I will never be able to write outside my culture. It will definitely be limiting. I think we should let the reader be the judge of that. If it feels off or unreal the reader will take care of it.”
And Lindsey Russell quipped: “Totally agree – what ‘life experience’ of murdering dozens of people did Agatha Christie have?”
So, how many people did Agatha Christie murder or how many murders did she solve to enable her to write stories about Miss Marple and Hercule Poirot? My guess is none, yet she’s been an all-time best-selling author for nearly a century.
In a recent argument on an FB community, I pointed out the fallacy of lived experience being required to write fiction by using similar examples and was accused of drama. I don’t think I was being dramatic, but I do think the person who disagreed so strongly with me was being dogmatic and a gatekeeper. So, let me repeat this: Write what you can imagine and do the necessary research for verisimilitude. So, no, the author doesn’t need that lived experience, although sometimes research does involve—and is enhanced by—lived experience.
If we may only write from lived experience, then our stories would be limited and the scope of our stories small.
Cognitive dissonance or oxymoron?
I came across a solicitation seeking an skilled writer to produce “awesome,” SEO-optimized blog posts of 650-700 words each. Count me interested. What subject? What’s the production schedule? What’s the pay?
The potential vendor was offering payment of $10 per article.
I promptly lost interest.
Let’s do the math.
A quick Google search on the average time required to research, write, edit, and revise a 1,000-word article generates a wide range of results, from AI’s reply of “about 25 minutes” to the other end at three hours and 20 minutes. The AI response doesn’t take into account the time needed to research a topic or organize the information. It also doesn’t include the time needed to review what was drafted, carefully edit that content, and revise to improve it.
So, for the sake of this argument, let’s “guesstimate” the time needed for each article to two full hours for the document length specified in the solicitation.
That’s two hours allotted for research, writing, editing, and revising. There’s no indication as to whether the writer is also expect to source images to accompany the article. But the articles must be optimized for SEO, and that requires additional time, effort, and skill.
For $10. That’s $5 per hour. That’s not just paltry, it’s insulting.
Let me be perfectly frank: The odds anyone will receive “awesome” content written by anyone who works for $5 per hour are very, very low. Those are the rates one might expect to pay a freelance writer from a Third World country, a writer whose command of English is better than my command of that person’s language but nowhere nearly strong enough to meet professional standards. In other words, that client will get what he or she pays for: garbage content poorly written or generated by AI.
If you want excellence, you have to pay for it or do it yourself.
The moral of the story: Don’t insult the professionals you’re trying to hire.
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Hard boiled, scrambled, over easy, and sunny side up: eggs are the musings of Holly Bargo, the pseudonym for the author.
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